Please help me to correct these grammer mistakes(Important)

Hi,

Please post your questions directly into this Forum. It makes it more convenient for us to answer them.

In addition, it's usually better if you alslo post what you think the answers are, so that we can see more clearly where you need assistance.

Thanks, Clive

Each of the following sentences contains a faulty comparison. Rewrite each sentence to eliminate the error.

a. The word-processing equipment in the direct-mail department op­erates more efficiently than the customer relations department.

b. The production manager expressed greater appreciation for the temporary help than the sales manager.

c. Julia Valenti, th

Hi,

Thank you. As I said,

In addition, it's usually better if you also post what you think the answers are, so that we can see more clearly where you need assistance.

I'm sure you must have ideas about at least some of these.

Clive

I need the answers today because I have an exam. So, Plz any body know the answers put them here

thank's

The Answers For the First Question: (I don't know if it is correct)

a- The word-processing equipment in the direct-mail department op­erates more efficiently than the The word-processing equipment in the customer relations department.
b- The production manager expressed greater appreciation for the temporary help than the sales manager expressed.
c. Julia Valenti, the personn

Hi,

Sorry. My interest is in helping you to learn, not in basically doing your exam for you. Perhaps someone else will be willing to do that.

Good luck, Clive

Ok thank's .. it is not an exam ... it is practise on the exam .. my orginal language is not english because of that I don't know if my answers correct at the time that I want the answers quickly.

Any way thank's. I don't want your help. I hope any body can help me .. and I'm Sorry

The Answers of the second questions:

a- the line operator shocked violently by the sparking transformer

b- The man who was making calculations rose from the desk and left the room hastily

c-in spit of other commitments, the committe adjourned immediatly after decided that the work must be completed by monday

d- he planned to take a short vacation after the conve

I don't know the rest answers! could any body help me plz?