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Teh78523 Posted 15 years ago
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Please help me to correct the sentences
I have an interview next week. I am very nervous because I must use English. I prepared some interview question. Please help me to correct the sentences as follow,
Introduce yourself
I am Sheila. I am from Malaysia and just graduated from University in Taiwan. My research focus on using microencapsulation techniques and trehalose to protect lactic acid bacteria from freezing storage time in order to maintain their survival. Our results displayed that microencapsulation can improve the survival of lactic acid bacteria during freezing storage but trehalose cant work. I am very grateful to offer me the chance for an interview.
Could you describe your research
First, we used microencapsulation techniques to form capsule with lactic acid bacteria. ----------------------------------------------------------havent finished yet.
Could your research be mass production?
Currently, this can be use in cultured milk product.
Why do you want this job?
As I know, this company is the oldest drinks manufacturer in my. It produces many dairy products. My research focus on Lactobacillus. I think this is an appropriate job for me to develop my laboratory skills.
What are your strengths?
I think it is my patience. I reexamine what I have done to make sure It will be ok.
Is there anything I haven't told you about the job or company that you would like to know?
Any benefit or allowance this company will be offered?
What can you contribute to this company?
I have laboratory skills and knowledge to contribute to this company. The laboratory skills that I got include preparing, culturing and inoculating lactic acid bacteria.
What did you gain from internship?
Actually, I dont have practical experience. I just watched they perform their job to me. We are 10 student internship there.
Introduce yourself
I am Sheila. I am from Malaysia and just graduated from University in Taiwan. My research focus on using microencapsulation techniques and trehalose to protect lactic acid bacteria from freezing storage time in order to maintain their survival. Our results displayed that microencapsulation can improve the survival of lactic acid bacteria during freezing storage but trehalose cant work. I am very grateful to offer me the chance for an interview.
Could you describe your research
First, we used microencapsulation techniques to form capsule with lactic acid bacteria. ----------------------------------------------------------havent finished yet.
Could your research be mass production?
Currently, this can be use in cultured milk product.
Why do you want this job?
As I know, this company is the oldest drinks manufacturer in my. It produces many dairy products. My research focus on Lactobacillus. I think this is an appropriate job for me to develop my laboratory skills.
What are your strengths?
I think it is my patience. I reexamine what I have done to make sure It will be ok.
Is there anything I haven't told you about the job or company that you would like to know?
Any benefit or allowance this company will be offered?
What can you contribute to this company?
I have laboratory skills and knowledge to contribute to this company. The laboratory skills that I got include preparing, culturing and inoculating lactic acid bacteria.
What did you gain from internship?
Actually, I dont have practical experience. I just watched they perform their job to me. We are 10 student internship there.
Top answer
Introduce yourself I am very grateful for this chance for an interview. My name is Sheila [surname]. I am from Malaysia and I just graduated from [Name] University in Taiwan.
- Introduce yourself I am very grateful for this chance for an interview.
- My name is Sheila [surname].
- I am from Malaysia and I just graduated from [Name] University in Taiwan.
- My research focus was on using microencapsulation techniques and trehalose to protect lactic acid bacteria from freezing temperatures during storage in order to ensure their survival.
- Our results revealed that microencapsulation can improve the survival of lactic acid bacteria during freezing, but trehalose does not .
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Introduce yourself
I am very grateful for this chance for an interview. My name is Sheila [surname]. I am from Malaysia and I just graduated from [Name] University in Taiwan. My research focus was on using microencapsulation techniques and trehalose to protect lactic acid bacteria from freezing temperatures during storage in o
I am very grateful for this chance for an interview. My name is Sheila [surname]. I am from Malaysia and I just graduated from [Name] University in Taiwan. My research focus was on using microencapsulation techniques and trehalose to protect lactic acid bacteria from freezing temperatures during storage in o
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