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Lim Peng Peng Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help me to correct the letter.
To Whom It May concerns
I, the undersigned, Emilie Khov, and I am in Cambodia to address No168 Villa, Monireth Bld, and Phnom Penh, of the principal to give authority, hereby Mrs. Tan Pin Mei supervised for the entire duration of the assessment of my daughter Kelly Khambo was born on 08/08/99 for DAS.
Do all that can be useful and necessary for this purpose.
I, the undersigned, Emilie Khov, and I am in Cambodia to address No168 Villa, Monireth Bld, and Phnom Penh, of the principal to give authority, hereby Mrs. Tan Pin Mei supervised for the entire duration of the assessment of my daughter Kelly Khambo was born on 08/08/99 for DAS.
Do all that can be useful and necessary for this purpose.
Top answer
This whole sentence is confusing because the relationship of your individual statements is not clear. ). Also, I am do not know what DAS is.
- This whole sentence is confusing because the relationship of your individual statements is not clear.
- ).
- Also, I am do not know what DAS is.
- Let me try to organize this into a sentence.
- Let me know if it says what you want it to.
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This whole sentence is confusing because the relationship of your individual statements is not clear. It looks like you want to do the following:
Identify yourself, your daughter, and the supervisory person;
Grant parental authority to the supervisory person (to do what exactly?).
Also, I am do not know what DAS is.
Let me try to organize
Identify yourself, your daughter, and the supervisory person;
Grant parental authority to the supervisory person (to do what exactly?).
Also, I am do not know what DAS is.
Let me try to organize
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