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Crismthomas Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please help me to correct the letter

Sub: Request for leave on the occasion of marriage

Dear Sir,

I would like to inform you that my marriage has been decided to solemnize on------

I, there for want to go on leave for a period of ---- days with effect from------

I would be grateful to you if you could do the needful to sanction me the leave

Yours Faithfully
  

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Dear Sir, I would like to request some annual leave to commence on ........ days, and return on ........... It would be most appreciated if you would advise your approval, as this leave is required for my marriage on .....

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  • Dear Sir, I would like to request some annual leave to commence on ........
  • days, and return on ...........
  • It would be most appreciated if you would advise your approval, as this leave is required for my marriage on .....
  • Yours faithfully, ....
  • There are many ways this could be written, some workplaces actually have a formal request sheet that must be filled out & submitted.
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Dear Sir,

I would like to request some annual leave to commence on ........ for a period of .....days, and return on ...........

It would be most appreciated if you would advise your approval, as this leave is required for my marriage on .....

Yours faithfully,

....

There are many ways this could be written, some workplaces actually have a formal reque
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This is way off. Here is a correction:

Dear Sir,

I would like to inform you that my marriage has been decided to solemnize on I am getting married on --.

I, there for Therefore, I am requesting want to go on leave for a period of -- days with effect from-- to --.

I would be grateful to you if you could do the ne
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