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Nachuzz Posted 9 years ago
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Please be informed that our meeting capacity starts with a 6 seater, 8 seater,10 seater,16 seater and 18 seater. 6 Seater is the smallest meeting room we have. As a special consideration we are happy to offer you a 35% off on the total bill.
  

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The first phrase is useless and off-putting. Our meeting room capacities are 6 seats, 8 seats, 10 seats, 16 seats, and 18 seats. As a special consideration, we are happy to offer you 35% off your total bill.

  • The first phrase is useless and off-putting.
  • Our meeting room capacities are 6 seats, 8 seats, 10 seats, 16 seats, and 18 seats.
  • As a special consideration, we are happy to offer you 35% off your total bill.
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The first phrase is useless and off-putting.

Our meeting room capacities are 6 seats, 8 seats, 10 seats, 16 seats, and 18 seats. As a special consideration, we are happy to offer you 35% off your total bill.

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