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JAYAKRISHNA J Posted 7 years ago
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Dear Sir

On the recommendation of Prof. xxxxx, I am writing to you in order to find a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group.

After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research xxx I had designed a project on the sensing of xxx using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of xxx and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application.

In May 2017 I got the master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do the project in xxxx. There I gained profound knowledge in synthesis and characterization of biomass-derived chemicals. My thesis is related to the Synthesis of dialkoxy methyl furan under heterogeneous catalysis.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. I was also lucky enough to have a discussion with you. Having carefully observed your ongoing research I believe that getting an opportunity to work under your able guidance will be a rewarding experience for my research career I am confident that my training, academic background & research experience would make me a worthwhile contribution to your research program


Thank you very much for your time consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

  

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After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research *** I had designed a project on the sensing of *** using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of *** and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application. That is one very very long sentence, and the verb tenses are all mixed up. It should be 2-4 sentences with consistent tenses.

  • After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research *** I had designed a project on the sensing of *** using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of *** and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application.
  • That is one very very long sentence, and the verb tenses are all mixed up.
  • It should be 2-4 sentences with consistent tenses.
  • Also, what is MPhil Research?
  • In May 2017 I got the master’s degree in Pure and Applied Chemistry.
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After my graduation I am working as MPhil Research *** I had designed a project on the sensing of *** using biomarker on nanomaterials especially yyyy from this lab I obtained skills in synthesis and characterization of *** and there wide range application in bioimaging and sensing thus focused my interest on nanomaterials and their application.

That is one very

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Dear Sir


On the recommendation of xxxx, I am writing to you in order to find a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group.

I am currently an MPhil Research scholar at Kerala University Karyavattom campus in the Department of Chemistry, working under the advisement of Professor ***. I had designed a project on the sensing of prediabetes biomarkers on nanomateri

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