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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for given me a leave extension at this time.
As you may be aware, I am going through very difficult time in my life as we have decided to end our marriage life by mutual consent. We filed an application for it.
As planned, I am leaving my daughter in my home town and coming back to resume my work next week. As my daughter is alone there, I can’t work there for a long period. I am, therefore, requesting you to arrange a transfer for me in our office branch at home town where I can work and mange my daughter as well.
Thank you in advance for your kind consideration.
  

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I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for given granting m e the l eave extension at this time. As you may be aware, I am going through a very difficult time in my life as we my wife/husband and I have decided to end our marriage life by mutual consent. We have filed an application for that.

  • I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for given granting m e the l eave extension at this time.
  • As you may be aware, I am going through a very difficult time in my life as we my wife/husband and I have decided to end our marriage life by mutual consent.
  • We have filed an application for that.
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  • As planned, I am leaving my daughter in my hom et own and coming back to X to resume my work next week.
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I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for given granting me the leave extension at this time.
As you may be aware, I am going through a very difficult time in my life as we my wife/husband and I have decided to end our marriage life by mutual consent. We have filed an applicatio

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