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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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As planned, we have delivered all the dining and linen items as in the attached list to the site. Our representative will set up the room with the necessary items from the items delivered at the site. We now need to know that to whom we have to hand over all these items including spares and installed items.
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As planned (or as requested), we have delivered to the site all the dining and linen items (or dinnerware and linens) as described in the attached list. Our representative will set up the room with the required items from those delivered. We just need to know the name of the person who will be accepting these items, including spares and installed items.
- As planned (or as requested), we have delivered to the site all the dining and linen items (or dinnerware and linens) as described in the attached list.
- Our representative will set up the room with the required items from those delivered.
- We just need to know the name of the person who will be accepting these items, including spares and installed items.
- Comment: It seems unusual to me that the delivery has already taken place before we are asking for the name of the person co-ordinating the event.
- The parenthetical phrases are optional suggestions, depending on the actual nature of these items.
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As planned (or as requested), we have delivered to the site all the dining and linen items (or dinnerware and linens) as described in the attached list. Our representative will set up the room with the required items from those delivered. We just need to know the name of the person who will be accepting these items, including spares and installed items.
Comment: It seems unusual to me
Comment: It seems unusual to me
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