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I am very much concerned about the incident happened in the today's practice section. We have been practicing soccer without referee since we started the practice section, and we are all agreed that if any foul occurred during the game, the both players should be finalized and agreed who has done the mistake and no other player will be interfered. We are practicing a soccer game and there will be a physical contact and sometime foul may be occurred but no physical activities will be entertained, but one of the players kicked and slap the other player because he fould him today during game. If any foul occurred, you should take foul a kick besides do not kick the player who involved in the foul physically. As a discipilanary action, we need to remove this player from the squad, and infom everyone about our rules and regulation. His attitude and behavior to co-players very rude and arrogance. This kind of habits will not be entertained anymore
  

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Anon, I don't know much about soccer, but I will try to suggest some corrections. I am very much concerned about the incident that happened in the today's practice section. ) finalized and agreed who has done the mistake and no other player will be interfered.

  • Anon, I don't know much about soccer, but I will try to suggest some corrections.
  • I am very much concerned about the incident that happened in the today's practice section.
  • ) finalized and agreed who has done the mistake and no other player will be interfered.
  • (I don't understand the last part.
  • ) When w e are practicing for a soccer game , and there will be a physical contact and sometime s a foul may occur.
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Anon,
I don't know much about soccer, but I will try to suggest some corrections.

I am very much concerned about the incident that happened in the today's practice section. We had been practicing soccer without a referee since we started the practice section, and we are all agreed that if any foul occurred during the game, the both

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