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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Please help me to correct my sentences

As you are aware, one of our staff members, Mr. Kevin is on medical leave for one month due to heart diseas occurred last month. He is now planning to go for his annual vacation from (date) to (date). Hence, please arrange his leave settlement at the earliest so that he can prepare his travel arrangement accordingly.
  

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Is 'Kevin' his family name? We do not use 'Mr' with first names.

— Mister Micawber

  • Is 'Kevin' his family name?
  • We do not use 'Mr' with first names.
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Is 'Kevin' his family name? We do not use 'Mr' with first names.
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Thank you for your help
It is first name. His name is Kevin Fernandez
So, are the above sentences are grammatically correct?
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AnonymousSo, are the above sentences are grammatically correct?
No. It is not socially correct to mention the particular illness.

As you are aware, one of our staff members, Mr. Fernandez is on medical leave for one month, and he is now planning to take his annual vacation from (date) to (date). Please arrange his leave
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Thank you once again.
can I write the first sentence with the particular illness.
"As you are aware. one of our staff members, Mr. Fernandez is on medical leave for one month due to myocardial infarction last month.
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Mister Micawber It is socially correct to mention the particular illness.
Is that what you meant to write?
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fivejedjonIs that what you meant to write?
No... < sigh >
I've fixed it now. Ta.
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Mister Micawber< sigh >
Story of my life.

< sigh>
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