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We are hereby returning the following badges collected for KLM project. Some staff members did not return their pass, and it is clearly indicated against their names. It was lost by themselves, so fine will be applicable
  

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We are herewith returning the following badges collected for the KLM project. Some staff members did not return their passes, and this is clearly indicated against their names. They lost them themselves, so a fine is applicable.

  • We are herewith returning the following badges collected for the KLM project.
  • Some staff members did not return their passes, and this is clearly indicated against their names.
  • They lost them themselves, so a fine is applicable.
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We are herewith returning the following badges collected for the KLM project. Some staff members did not return their passes, and this is clearly indicated against their names. They lost them themselves, so a fine is applicable.

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