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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Please help me to correct my sentence

As requested, we tried to deliver the above order to the client, but they did not accept it and they said that they had already informed our office that they don't require this order
  

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This sounds about right. I would say it slightly differently, but more for style than for correctness: As requested, we tried to deliver the order in question to the client, but they did not accept it and said that they had already informed our office that they didn't need this order.

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  • This sounds about right.
  • I would say it slightly differently, but more for style than for correctness: As requested, we tried to deliver the order in question to the client, but they did not accept it and said that they had already informed our office that they didn't need this order.
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This sounds about right. I would say it slightly differently, but more for style than for correctness:

As requested, we tried to deliver the order in question to the client, but they did not accept it and said that they had already informed our office that they didn't need this order.
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