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Micheley Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
please help me to correct my letter of the motivation
Hello, everybody, I am a chinese girl in France, I'd like to go to England to continue my studies in master degree in Visuel Arts. I wrote a letter of the motivation for that, but I didn't have good base in English, in aditional, I learned French for a long time, So I mix a lot the French and English
Could you please help me to correct it? (the form, the grammer, and the phrase)
Humanities Bridgeford St
The University of Manchester
Oxford Road, Manchester M13 9PL
9 April 2006
Dear Sir or Madam:
I would kindly like to introduce my candidacy for the Master’s Degree program in Art History & Visual Studies department at the University of Manchester.
Art History & Visual Studies is one of Manchester's best-established subject areas with academic staff covering a broad range of historical periods, and the research and teaching covers also a diverse range of topics, including art technologies (from the archaeological to new media); urbanism and garden design; links between visual and literary cultures; material culture and the decorative arts; collecting and display; modern and contemporary practices from performance and installation art to film, video, and Internet practices; and critical theory from the earliest writings relevant to the arts down to those of recent times.
This study will help me to further develop my knowledge, improve my skills and to continue with my visual art research activities. I am interested in this program as deeper knowledge of art, social, and cultural and it will certainly help with my future career to be a computer graphics expert or a product designer.
I have achieved a license’s degree in the LMD european grading system in department of plastic arts from the University of Strasbourg in France, in May 2006.
After two years of training of practical courses and theoretical applied arts, I have followed the courses of visual arts in esthetics, history of art, architecture, photography, computer graphics, drawing and graphics. I have a good skill of the drawing and painting as well as good knowledge in computer graphics, I wish to continue my study in Master of Applied Arts in Visual Arts.
Because that the course of the master of applied arts will provides the opportunity to intensively develop talents, concepts and expertise in any of the major studies offered within the Department of Art. We will be also encouraged to submit individual course proposals for specialization in photography, video, film and post object art. It is designed to enable students to reach a high level of professionalism and qualification in both art practice and visual arts theory.
Also and in order to carry out my passion via this vocational guidance, I request your benevolent attention to study my file and to give access to me the formation of your establishment.
Should you require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be grateful if you would consider me for this post and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Name
Could you please help me to correct it? (the form, the grammer, and the phrase)
Art History & Visual Studies
Name
Adress
City
Post Code: 00000
France
Humanities Bridgeford St
The University of Manchester
Oxford Road, Manchester M13 9PL
9 April 2006
Dear Sir or Madam:
I would kindly like to introduce my candidacy for the Master’s Degree program in Art History & Visual Studies department at the University of Manchester.
Art History & Visual Studies is one of Manchester's best-established subject areas with academic staff covering a broad range of historical periods, and the research and teaching covers also a diverse range of topics, including art technologies (from the archaeological to new media); urbanism and garden design; links between visual and literary cultures; material culture and the decorative arts; collecting and display; modern and contemporary practices from performance and installation art to film, video, and Internet practices; and critical theory from the earliest writings relevant to the arts down to those of recent times.
This study will help me to further develop my knowledge, improve my skills and to continue with my visual art research activities. I am interested in this program as deeper knowledge of art, social, and cultural and it will certainly help with my future career to be a computer graphics expert or a product designer.
I have achieved a license’s degree in the LMD european grading system in department of plastic arts from the University of Strasbourg in France, in May 2006.
After two years of training of practical courses and theoretical applied arts, I have followed the courses of visual arts in esthetics, history of art, architecture, photography, computer graphics, drawing and graphics. I have a good skill of the drawing and painting as well as good knowledge in computer graphics, I wish to continue my study in Master of Applied Arts in Visual Arts.
Because that the course of the master of applied arts will provides the opportunity to intensively develop talents, concepts and expertise in any of the major studies offered within the Department of Art. We will be also encouraged to submit individual course proposals for specialization in photography, video, film and post object art. It is designed to enable students to reach a high level of professionalism and qualification in both art practice and visual arts theory.
Also and in order to carry out my passion via this vocational guidance, I request your benevolent attention to study my file and to give access to me the formation of your establishment.
Should you require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be grateful if you would consider me for this post and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Name
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I hope this is of some help to you. There were several sentences where your meaning was vague to me. Also, I am from the USA and I know our English is sometimes a bit different than the English of England.
- I hope this is of some help to you.
- There were several sentences where your meaning was vague to me.
- Also, I am from the USA and I know our English is sometimes a bit different than the English of England.
- *** bless you in your efforts.
- Please allow me to introduce my candidacy for the Master’s Degree program in the Art History & Visual Studies department at the University of Manchester.
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I hope this is of some help to you. There were several sentences where your meaning was vague to me. Also, I am from the USA and I know our English is sometimes a bit different than the English of England. *** bless you in your efforts.
Please allow me to introduce my candidacy for the Master’s Degree program in the Art History & Visual Studies department at the University of Ma
Please allow me to introduce my candidacy for the Master’s Degree program in the Art History & Visual Studies department at the University of Ma
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