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The charts illustrate how many Japanese visitors made a trip overseas from 1985 to 1995 and Australia’s stock of the Japanese tourist market.

The number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad increased gradually, whereas the amount of Australia’s share of Japan’s traveler market fluctuated from 1985 to 1995.

The number of Japanese travelling abroad experienced upward trend over the course of 10 years starting in 1985. There was a significant growth in the number of Japanese travelers from 5 to 11 million people between 1985 and 1995. On the other hand, the finger of Japanese visitors going overseas declined slightly at 10,5 million people in 1991 compared to 11 million people during the year 1990. The number of visitors in 1995 was the largest one during the period of time from 1985 to 1995.

There was a fluctuation in the amount of Australia’ share in Japan. The proportion of Australia’s share surged markedly from 0% to just under 5% of Japanese tourist market between 1984 and 1988, prior to hitting a slight fall in 1989. After that, the percentage of Australia’s share recovered remarkably from over 4% to over 6% between 1989 and 1993. In addition, in 1993, the amount of Australia’s share reached a high point at 6.2% in the Japanese tourist market.