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The chart represents how much space time males and females relaxed in term of diversified occupation status.
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en and women in unemployment and retirement sector spend almost their leisure time on relaxation. On the other hand male and female full time employers had the least space time for enjoyment.
The proportion of hours of leisure time of unemployed people and retired people were the same. Whereas the percentage of men out of work and retired men accounted for 90% , the amount of space time spending by unemployed and retired women stood at 75%. In comparison with the ladies above, housewives often spent half their leisure time on enjoyment.
Female full time employers stood at 38%. Similarly, 40% of hours of free time was spent by part-time employed women. The amount of hours of space time being spent by male full-time employers was 48%.
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Please try again. You did not understand the chart at all. The chart represents how much space time ( Space-time relates to Einstein's theory of relativity.
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- You did not understand the chart at all.
- The chart represents how much space time ( Space-time relates to Einstein's theory of relativity.
- ) males and females relaxed in term of diversified occupation status .
- (ungrammatical) Men and women in unemployment and retirement sector (Not good English) spend almost (missing word) their leisure time on relaxation.
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Please try again. You did not understand the chart at all.
The chart represents how much space time (Space-time relates to Einstein's theory of relativity. I don't think the chart is about physics.) males and females relaxed in term of diversified occupation status. (ungrammatical)
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