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To be well-informed, a person should get information from many different news resources. Do you agree with this idea

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We are living in a world that is being actualized every second with new informations. In order to update these news, some people prefer to choose one kind of resource like just television or even only one channel or newspaper. Personally, to be well-informed, I consider that getting information from many resources is the best way. There are several reasons why I agree with this idea.

To begin with, the different news resources allow us to get a multi-dimensional view about a phenomenon. In fact, not every channel or newspaper expresses the same point of view cause behind this news, they are probably manipulated by someone. For example, to present about a new candidate of the presidential election, some sites have the trend to talk about their mistakes in the past, another prefer indicate his good actions. Eventually, the reader would be simply manipulated and wouldn’t get the entire information if they just choose one source. However, it wouldn’t be the case if we know how to select the information to have a total perspective about everything.

In addition, different news source make our way of reaching the informations more interesting and practical. With the development of the new technology, we are able to read news on the internet, watch the illustrated video, listen to the voice record or simply get the news on our phone anytime and anywhere. Furthermore, the variety of channel allow me to choose the best one that adapt to my situation. For example, I prefer to listen to the radio in the morning when I brush my teeth without worries of lecture; so I can optimize my time.

To conclude, a various resource of information is present in our actual life. Consequently, we should benefice it as the two reasons that I just explained above: its contribution to a multi-dimensional view about a subject and many interesting ways to get access to the informations.