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0Hello everybody, I’m Shirley. I am a quiet person that I enjoy staying at home in my leisure time. I enjoy playing with my pets. Actually, I have four cats and a dog, all of whom are lovely and unique. So I never feel bored when I stay at home. Also, I enjoy reading book. ”Pride and Prejudice” is my favorite novel that I had read it by several times. 02br
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00To be honest, my English level is low. However, as we all know English is essential in our world. , no matter for your further study or your future career. Thus I need to improve it by a great effort. Furthermore, I will sit for the Use of English examination in the coming April. I hope that I can have a satisfactory result in it. 02br
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