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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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As per the following email, Please let me know that the Sunday 2:00 PM will suit for you to have meeting with Mr. john & please let me if you want to add any other topic or item to discuss with him . Thanks
  

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You don't need such 'as per' phrases. We don't use 'Mr' with first names. Use either 'John' or 'Mr Smith'.

  • You don't need such 'as per' phrases.
  • We don't use 'Mr' with first names.
  • Use either 'John' or 'Mr Smith'.
  • Please let me know whether Sunday at 2:00 PM will suit you to meet with Mr.
  • [surname], and let me if you want to add any other topic or item to discuss with him .
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You don't need such 'as per' phrases.
We don't use 'Mr' with first names. Use either 'John' or 'Mr Smith'.

Please let me know whether Sunday at 2:00 PM will suit you to meet with Mr. [surname], and let me if you want to add any other topic or item to discuss with him .

Thank you.

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