Please help me to correct following sentences

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1. Another faculty advised me to consider MPA degree as well since you take many more MPA students compared to MPP. I would like to be considered for MPA degree as well, though MPPis my first preference

2. My earlier Master’s programme and the thesis I submitted was basically followed qualitative research methods.

3. I came to know that schools may offer additional non-credit instructions to give the student a background in Economics and Statistics. I will take the opportunity of these additional instructions (credit or non-credit) in order to boost my skills and knowledge in quantitative methods and analysis.

4. It will be a great chance to work in a Canadian setting and internalize the work culture of on.

5. I am at the very early phase of academic life or research arena (which is more appropriate?), so I am still open in terms of formulating my idea.

6. The knowledge and experience I have gathered from my working period at different organizations might be helpful for MPP programme.

7. The curriculum of MPP has strong emphasis on statistics and microeconomics that motivates me to enroll in this programme.

8. If I can have additional experience in T.A/RA along with my study, it will not only enrich my knowledge but also lift up my profile

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

1. Another faculty advised me to consider the MPA degree as well since you take many more MPA students than ~~compared to~~ MPP students. I would like to be considered for the MPA degree as well, though MPP is my first preference

2. The research I performed to satisfy my earlier Master’s programme and the thesis I submitted ~~was~~ basically followed qualitative ~~research~~ methods.

3. I came to know that schools may offer additional non-credit courses ~~instructions~~ to give ~~the~~ students a background in Economics and Statistics. I will take the opportunity of these additional courses ~~instructions~~ (credit or non-credit) in order to boost my skills and knowledge in quantitative methods and analyses.

4. It will be a great chance to work in a Canadian setting and internalize the work culture of on. ???

5. I am at the very early phase of academic life ~~or research arena (which is more appropriate?)~~, so I am still open in terms of formulating my ideas.

6. The knowledge and experience I have gathered from my working ~~period~~ at different organizations might be helpful for the MPP programme.

7. The curriculum of the MPP has strong emphasis on statistics and microeconomics. That motivates me to enroll in this programme. (There are various ways to combine these 2 sentences.)

8. If I can have additional experience in as a T.A. or R.A. along with my studies, it will not only enrich my knowledge but also enhance my CV.

Mizanur · Answer

Alphecca Stars, would you help me to correct the following sentences. I gave common post, but did not receive reply. If you do it, I will be grateful.

1. It will be a great chance to work in a Canadian setting and internalize the work culture of one of the most developed countries in the world.
2. I am also thinking about making a comparative study on the nature of aid agencies and how recipient NGOs’ activities are varying based on the types of donor. For instances: How NGOs funded by NORAD and NGOs funded by CIDA vary in terms of their activities, work process and accountability pattern. More ideas are roaming inside my head regarding donor-NGO.
3. I already identified my field as already mentioned before. Hope I will be able to narrow down my research topic for the thesis with the progress of my study at graduate school.
4. After a couple of years’ experience, I came to Europe to pursue my Master’s in Public Administration in continuation of my bachelor’s study
5. I also had courses in research methodology.
6. Donors agencies are varies in terms their policies and strategies.
7. I will complete the program within two academic years
8. So professionally I hope to involve in r NGOs or intergovernmental organization or trans-national organizations
9. Graduate school is professional focused that allows networking and promise applied knowledge.
10. I have looked over the profiles of alumni students of MPP & MPA, and found that they are from different backgrounds and fields. I am certain that I will be to learn various things and obtain perspectives from fellows students

Mizanur · Answer

I have to finish my letter by tomorrow, I need to send my application package by post. If you help me to correct the above sentences, I will rectify my motivation letter according to the instructions. Thank you Alpecca Stars.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

1. It will be a great chance to work in a Canadian setting and experience / learn about / be immersed in ~~internalize~~ the work culture of one of the most developed countries in the world.

2. I am also thinking about making a comparative study on the nature of aid agencies and how recipient NGOs’ activities ~~are varying~~ vary based on the types of donor. For instance: How NGOs funded by NORAD and NGOs funded by CIDA vary in terms of their activities, work process and accountability patterns. More ideas are roaming inside my head regarding donor-NGO combinations?.
3. I have ~~already~~ identified my field as ~~already~~ mentioned before. ~~Hope~~ I will be able to narrow down my research topic for the thesis as I ~~with the~~ progress of with my studies at graduate school.
4. After a couple of years’ experience, I came to Europe to pursue my Master’s in Public Administration in as a continuation of my bachelor’s study.
5. I also had courses in research methodologies.
6. Donors agencies are varies in terms their policies and strategies.(??)
7. I will complete the program within two academic years.
8. So professionally I hope to involve in r(??) NGOs or intergovernmental organization or trans-national organizations
9. Graduate school is professional focused that allows networking and promise applied knowledge.(??)
10. I have looked over the profiles of the / some /a few alumni students of MPP & MPA, and found that they are from different backgrounds and fields. I am certain that I will be to learn various things and obtain perspectives from fellow students.

Mizanur · Answer

6. Donors agencies are varies in terms of their policies and strategies.- I wanted to mean that different donor agencies has different policies in monitoring their recipients NGOs, and they have different working procedure as well. Was it a correct sentence?

8. So professionally I hope to involve in r(??) NGOs or intergovernmental organization or trans-national organizations - I wanted to meant that I would like to take NGOs job as a profession. the para was :

""I also wish to become a part-time/fulltime faculty at Undergraduate level in Bangladesh; I think the connection with academia (research/education) will help me to nurture my intellectual endeavour. I personally love to work with young people. So professionally I hope to involve in/for NGOs or intergovernmental organization or trans-national organizations. In addition, I will try to engage in teaching profession if I get the adequate space".""

AlpheccaStars · Answer

MizanurWas it a correct sentence?

No. Are varies is not a grammatical verb form.

I also wish to become a part-time/fulltime faculty member at the undergraduate level in Bangladesh; I think the connection with academia (research/education) will help me to nurture my intellectual pursuits. ~~endeavour~~. I personally love to work with young people. So professionally I hope to be involved in NGOs, or intergovernmental organizations or trans-national organizations. In addition, I will try to enter the ~~engage in~~ teaching profession if ~~I get the~~ adequate space becomes available".""

Mizanur · Answer

Oh,, Now I see the grammatical error.

Thanks a lot Alphecca Stars. Your comments were extremely helpful for me.

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