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My dream house is a villa. It will be a large and beautiful villa. I want it will be outside China, because its weather is cooler than China. I want a swimming pool surrounded by grass in the yard. My villa will have 2 floors. The first floor for a big living room with a aquarium inside. There are 9 rooms in the second floor: 5 bedrooms and bathrooms in each, because 4 bedrooms for 4 people in my family, one for guests to stay; a kitchen with dining area; a room for working and studying; a relax room, where we can sing karaoke, play games …; and one toilet. I love dogs so I will feed ones. A large garden behind my villa, I can play with my dogs, do exercise or jog there. If my dream come true, I will invite you to visit.