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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Please, help me (To Clive)

0Hi Clive,02br
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00 I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear. Could you, please tell me if it's Ok now?02br
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002.c) 01b00"This chapter besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle, it's shown up the acceptance of gay union in the international scenery."02b00 00The first part of this sentence needs a verb, but the whole thing needs rewirtiting because it is unclear. Consider changingit to more than one sentence.02br
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1font 00Hi,02font 02br 02br 00 I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear. "02b 00 00The first part of this sentence needs a verb, but the whole thing needs rewriting because it is unclear. 02br 02br 00* Sentence: 00In the following chapter,the acceptance 01b 01u 01del 01font 00to of02font 00 02del 02u 02b 00the homosexual union is shown01del 01b 01u 00 up02u 02b 02del 00 in01font 01b 00(probably 'by' instead of 'in')02b 00 02font 00 the international scenery and01font 01b 00 01u 01del 00in02del 02u 02b 02font 01u 01font 00 the02font 00 02u 00Brazilian juridical system01font 01b 00.

— Clive

  • 1font 00Hi,02font 02br 02br 00 I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear.
  • "02b 00 00The first part of this sentence needs a verb, but the whole thing needs rewriting because it is unclear.
  • 02br 02br 00* Sentence: 00In the following chapter,the acceptance 01b 01u 01del 01font 00to of02font 00 02del 02u 02b 00the homosexual union is shown01del 01b 01u 00 up02u 02b 02del 00 in01font 01b 00(probably 'by' instead of 'in')02b 00 02font 00 the international scenery and01font 01b 00 01u 01del 00in02del 02u 02b 02font 01u 01font 00 the02font 00 02u 00Brazilian juridical system01font 01b 00.
  • 02b 02font 01font 00T02font 00here is also a brief study of the prejudice with regard to the homosexual in the course of 01font 01del 01u 01b 00the02b 02u 02del 02font 00 history, with approach in the equality principle.
  • 00 02br 02br 01font 01b 00How does 'scenery' show acceptance of homosexual unions?
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1font00Hi,02font02br
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00 I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear. Could you, please tell me if it's Ok now?02br
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002.c) 01b00"This chapter besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle, it's shown u
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0Hi Clive, 02br
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00Ok. Thank you very much!.02br
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00Best wishes,02br
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00Anon.02br
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00P.S.; In fact I think the correct is "international scene" because the word scenery refers to theater, isn't 0-
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