Please help me to check writing task 2. There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

in the ancient era , the human race discovered how to make fire, invented the wheel and laid the foundationfor today's printing technology. although all these facilitoes proved their great significance to all mankind throughout history,some people opine that the internet is the most important invention. from my respective, such a statement is a exaggeration, in spite of the many benefits of the internet.

the appearance of the internet brings many advantages . first of all, the internet contains an andless supply of knowledge and information that allow to learn about almost any topic or question. along with being a resource for studying, this invention also provides updating news about gobal issues, or beuty tips and so on ; which takes little time to access them. secondly,the internet has also changed the way people communicate dramatically. nowsady, instead of having to meet face-to-face , human can interact through the internet. this inventionhas helped humanity to overcome long distance, which used to obstruction in communication. therefore, communicating through the internet is incredibly useful as it helps us to communicate effectively without travelling.

although the power of the internet can't be overstated . i firmly believe that there are even more valuable inventions. the first is electricity,without which most all electronic devices can't function. in other words , the internet could be of no use if there were no electricity. the second is engines , which can be seen in a great diversity of facilities from the old hydropower locomotivesto today's luxury solar-powered airplanes. if there were no engines, people would have to use animal- powered or human- powered vehicles, which are often much slower than motored one. the final and most important discovery, from my point od view is mobile phones, which are the physical platform for various forms of digital commnunication . today, billions are using moblie phone to make calls and send text messenage on a daily basis , a much greater number than that of those using the internet for the same purpose .

in conclusion, the internet has some enormous advantagesto the human race, but there are even more significant discoveries. i predict that along with the internet, these three inventions will still be the cornerstones of future human.