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TrangVN Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me to check this . This is a process paragraph

In my opinion, a part-time job is encouraged when you are a freshman or a sophomore because you have enough free time to gain life experiences, get work experience from your job. So, these next steps will give you a hand to get part-time jobs. First of all, you should decide what kind of job you want to do. It must fit your free time and doesn’t disturb your main work. You can depend on your health condition to choose a job more accurately. Second, you need to do research on the company you’re applying for. You absolutely will know how much they pay for you or how many options about working time, how can you apply for a position that you want. Don’t forget to make your resume or curriculum vitae. Third, contact the company through emails if it’s acceptable or directly go to their office to fill in an application form. The following step is to come back home and wait for a call from them. If you’re shortlisted then just prepare yourself, don’t be stressed. Finally, all you need is to go to their job interview in time and be confident to answer questions smoothly. All of these steps ensure that you will effectively get a part-time job fitting you well.tpl

  

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  • Please post writing exercises (paragraphs, essays, and dialogues) in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.
  • htm Also please include your instructions in the post, so we know what your assignment is.
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Please post writing exercises (paragraphs, essays, and dialogues) in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post.
https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm


Also please include your ins

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You missed a lot of conjunctions. If you omit the conjunction, the sentence is not good English. It is not a grammatical sentence.


In my opinion, it is appropriate to work a part-time job is encouraged when you are a freshman or a sophomore because you have enough free time to gain life experience

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