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Nivea Posted 23 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me to check this letter :)
September 28, 2003,
Dear Dr ***:
As the personal assistant of Chairman ***, I already sent email to *** website several times, unfortunately, we do not get any reply from *** official organisation yet.
Since there is little time to due date, I am a little bit worry and wonder what is happening for these requiring letters. We already sent 4 photoes by attachment for security cards, meanwhile we hope them send the Invitation letter for this meeting.
Could you please to confirm whether or not everything is correct, if it is convenient to you to send Invitation letter by email or fax, we need use it as an important document for visa procedure urgently.
Looking forward to hear from you soon,
Yours sincerely,
Tele: ***
Fax: ***
E-mile:***
Dear Dr ***:
As the personal assistant of Chairman ***, I already sent email to *** website several times, unfortunately, we do not get any reply from *** official organisation yet.
Since there is little time to due date, I am a little bit worry and wonder what is happening for these requiring letters. We already sent 4 photoes by attachment for security cards, meanwhile we hope them send the Invitation letter for this meeting.
Could you please to confirm whether or not everything is correct, if it is convenient to you to send Invitation letter by email or fax, we need use it as an important document for visa procedure urgently.
Looking forward to hear from you soon,
Yours sincerely,
Tele: ***
Fax: ***
E-mile:***
Top answer
Hi Nivea, U've written a quite good letter except for a few grammatical errors. I reorganized some of the setences. The meaning has been changed a bit.
- Hi Nivea, U've written a quite good letter except for a few grammatical errors.
- I reorganized some of the setences.
- The meaning has been changed a bit.
- If Dr *** belong to the organisation, if so, the Dr will represent the organisation.
- you can use 'your organisation' to address the organisation.
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Hi Nivea,
U've written a quite good letter except for a few grammatical errors. I reorganized some of the setences. The meaning has been changed a bit. If Dr *** belong to the organisation, if so, the Dr will represent the organisation. you can use 'your organisation' to address the organisation. Second, are the photos included in those letters(emails)? I'm not sure whether my inter
U've written a quite good letter except for a few grammatical errors. I reorganized some of the setences. The meaning has been changed a bit. If Dr *** belong to the organisation, if so, the Dr will represent the organisation. you can use 'your organisation' to address the organisation. Second, are the photos included in those letters(emails)? I'm not sure whether my inter
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