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War, atomic bombs the days before and now, peace

Atomic bombs wouldn't never have made such a strong impression in my mind if they hadn't caused "The two bombings"-the historic event in the human history and then led the world to the Atomic Age.

These are generally information about "Little Boy" and "Fat man":

The atomic bombings in Hiroshima and Nagasaki in 1945, which killed between 129000 and 226000 people, claimed to be carried out for stopping the last long WW2 and decreasing the casualties of both sides: "Japan announced its surrender to the Allies on August 15, six days after the bombing of Nagasaki the Japanese government signed the instrument of surrender, effectively ending World War II." {1}

If we say War is fiend, so are Atomic Bombs the sons of War even though they were generated to contribute ending up their mother? Yes, because they are sons of demon, they are special in their own ways: killing back their mother and then obtained the appellation which used to belong to their mother: ‘’The most barbarous demon.”

After " Little Boy" and " Fat Man" ending War, the others Atomic Bombs, which are siblings of them, become necessary weapons for countries in National Defense. That is normal to say:" There isn't anything wrong here for countries to maintain and develop those atomic weapons." However, it's a little bit difficult to accept that atomic bombs still be able to be used in the future like they used to be, but it must be in very very far future because luckily nowadays countries have strong solidarity. Whereas, people all over the world really solicitous about the prospect of the world if there appeared any nuclear war again. That is the reason why there are lots of people have voted against keeping atomic bombs in countries. However, it will never be approved: the governments cannot spend massive amount of time and money making modern atomic weapons to destroy all of those things then.

Why do they have to keep and improve those dangerous weapons-which were hardly created but easily destroy all of the human civilization in a short time, while they don't have to use them?

I would like to answer this question by other asking:" If it hadn't had the World War 2, would atomic bombs have appeared?" I believe that the answer is " No", but there is one thing for sure: If there had was peace in that period of time, " Little Boy" and " Fat Man" couldn't have killed any person in Hiroshima and Nagasaki even if they did exist or not.

According to Wikipedia:"The justification for the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki is still debated to this day." In this essay, I won't analyze two sides, the detail that I want to mention here is the phrase:Still debated to this day. We can easily see that there was a massive concussion for people all around the world. Yes, that may wasn't a time when the WW2 reached the climax, but that was a time when humanity witnessed the devastation of war very clearly, it really caused haunt for the world. That was a time when lots of people realized they hadn't scared atomic bombs, but extremely anxious about what would bring it and what would it bring to them.

Do the atomic bombings event in the past effect us in ways, when countries claim their power and maintain security by atomic bombs because those weapons make they reminisced the past days when peace just only established again after Japan surrendered? Atomic Bombs nowadays like the treaty between war and peace, we keep it to remind the past, to prevent it to be happened again and to head for the better future.

It is not to say that atomic bombs can make a big effect on people's awareness about Peace just by standing there, that is not correct. If atomic bombs can be used to enlighten the peace effectively, governments and the mass medias should do lots of things by using the past bombings images. I believe that it is necessary to intensify what atomic bombs caused before by short films, celebrated days, slogans-for-peace,.... everything that can enlighten the close relationship between War, Atomic Bombs and Peace-to remind all of us:" War created Atomic Weapons, those Weapons contribute making Peace, Peace can be stronger by Atomic Bombs and War can also win by this weapon's type." The only factor that can control the heading of the situation is Humanity.