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One of my favorite films is “She was pretty”. It is a popular Korean drama especially the youth, produced by MBC in 2015. The drama is about the love story between Kim Hye-jin and Ji Sung-joon after they couldn’t met together for a long time. Formerly they studied in the same class. While Hye-jin was pretty and admired girl from a rich family, Sung-joon was a corpulent and timid boy. Hye-jin helped Sung-joon out his mother’s death of obsession, then they became close together. One day, Sung-joon and father went to America to settle. When Hye-jin father company went bankrupt, they lost contact. After many years, Sung-joon finally found the way to contact Hye-jin. Then the two decided to meet again in a park. Unfortunately, Sung-joon was unable to recognize Hye-jin because now while he became a handsome and successful man, she lost her beauty and attraction. So when Hye-jin saw Sung-joon, she felt inferior and asked her best friend, Ha-ri, to replace her to meet him. After a few days, Hye-jin work as a assistant at The Most magazine office, where Sung-joon was the deputy chief editor. During the whole time they work together, Sung-joon slowly realized that Hye-jin was his real childhood friend and first love without Ha-ri. Finally. They became lovers of themselves and had a happy marriage with a cute daughter. In my opinion, the film is highly amusing and suitable for the one who love romantic comedy. I feel comfortable and cheerful every watching this drama.