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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.


Given is a bar chart provided a comparison of the electricity generated and consumed between the top ten countries in the world in 2014. The countries to be compared are China, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea Rep.
It is evident from the information provided that China took the first place of the all countries in both using and producing electricity with 5398 and 5322 billion kWh. America stood the second-ranked with 4099 billion kWh of production and 3866 kWh consumption which are followed by Russia with about 1038 and 1057 billion kWh electricity.

It is also interesting to note that although there was a significant drop from United States to Russia, the other countries made slight fluctuations. Specifically, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea Rep generated orderly 936,2, 871, 618,9, 561,2, 5307, 526,6, 485,1, billion kWh when the usage of those varied from 449,5 to 856,7 kWh in that year.