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The chart shows the expenditure of 2 nations:the UK and France, on consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume, camera) in 2010.

Overall,UK spent more money than France on consumer goods in total. Both of them spent most money on cars, least on perfume in the UK and cameras in France. In addition, the most significant difference in expenditure between 2 countries was on camera.

In terms of cars, people in the UK spent about 450k £ on this, higher than French who spent £400000. Moreover, the British afforded more money on books than French around £400000 and £300000, respectively. The money spent on cameras in the UK (about £350000) was twice higher than that in France (only £150000)

On the other hand, the amount of remaining goods was higher in France. Above £350000 was spent by the French on computers which was slightly more than the British who spent exactly £350000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200000 of expenditure in France but under £150000 in Britain