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The line graph illustrates how European country consumed fish and three different meat groups throughout the period from 1979 to 2004
Overall, fish wasn't really common in European country. It's clearly that the data always shows the loss of fish consumption trend with other meat groups. However, beef and lamp also had the same destiny. Except the use up of chicken still keep rising steadily.
It can be seen in 1979, beef had the most advantages of consumption with more than 200 grams per person per week. But after some fluctuations, beef actually out of the top, gave way for the development of chicken, culminating in nearly 1989. After 25 years, chicken consumption had finally reached the vertex of around 250. Continued with the decline of beef, the figures of lamp also showed the same trend from 150 in 1979 to around 70 in 2004
However, fish accounted the lowest number during the period. European country only 60 grams in 1979 and 50 grams in 2004