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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
The figure gives information about weather forecasting process of Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are totally four steps in weather forecasting process. The Australian Bureau of Meteorology takes the incoming information from a satellite, radar or drifting buoy and broadcasts the weather forecasting via some means of communication.
The up-to-the-minute information is gathered and then analyzed, forecasted, expressing via several types of diagram. For example, the drifting buoy incoming information is converted into a synoptic chart; the radar collects information which is processed into radar screen or synoptic chart; the satellite information is either converted to satellite photo or gathered by a radar and then processed into radar screen or synoptic chart.
After the analysis and forecasting stage, the information is used to prepare the weather broadcast by computer. Finally, the weather forecasts are broadcasted on three media means, namely TV newspaper, radio and recorded announcement.
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This is a very tricky exercise, and it involves your interpreting a generic process map based on some background knowledge about the subject of weather forecasts and the technology that is used to create them. The figure gives information about weather forecasting process of (missing word) Australian Bureau of Meteorology. As can be seen from the diagram, there are totally four steps in (missing word) weather forecasting process.
- This is a very tricky exercise, and it involves your interpreting a generic process map based on some background knowledge about the subject of weather forecasts and the technology that is used to create them.
- The figure gives information about weather forecasting process of (missing word) Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
- As can be seen from the diagram, there are totally four steps in (missing word) weather forecasting process.
- The Australian Bureau of Meteorology takes the incoming information from a satellite, radar (missing word) or drifting buoy and broadcasts the weather forecasting via some means of communication.
- The description that you gave in the following paragraph is not accurate.
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This is a very tricky exercise, and it involves your interpreting a generic process map based on some background knowledge about the subject of weather forecasts and the technology that is used to create them.
The figure gives information about weather forecasting process of (missing word) Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are
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