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Zhaoqinuo Posted 17 years ago
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Please help me to check a CV ,thanks

I'm an undergraduate approching to leaving school.Now I am busy looking for an internship. I expect someone could check my CV,and give me some suggestions to prefect my application.
Thanks a lot!
My CV:
Personal Information:

09 year’s graduate | Suzhou University of Science & Technology
Degree: Bachelor | Major: English Teaching

Female | Age of 23 | Single | member of the Communist Party |Nantong, Jiangsu province, China



Self-evaluation:

Academic Capacity: Fluency in spoken and written English


Proficiency in interpretation(oral and written)

Solid foundation of Professional knowledge


Personality: An action-oriented, results-driven attitude.

Initiative, independent and excellent communication skills

Able to work under pressure and meet deadline

Good managerial skills and organizational capabilities.

Energetic, creative with logical but innovative problem-solving skills



Career objective:

Interpretress, Translator

Administrative assistant to an executive
A position in Foreign Trade Department

An executive assistant position

A responsible administrative position which will provide challenge and freedom where I can bring my initiative and creativity into full play



. Profession and skills:
Advanced Interpreter Certificate

Intermediate interpretation Certificate

GPA: 3.3

Rank: Top 5%

TEM4: Good

CET6: Excellent

Computer ability: Good at office software



Social and school experience:
Voluntary of Suzhou International Tourism Festival (2008.5)

English tutor (2007.4-2007.6)

Preside over the English Speech Contest (2007.12)

Perform at the party of Ballroom Dancing Association (2006.3)

Organize Students to visit Martyrs garden (2005,11)

Participate in English Speech Contest, English Drama Competition, English Song Contest

Honors and Awards:

2007-2008: Integrated first-class scholarship

Triple-A pupil

Suzhou City, the second interpretation Contest Winner



2006-2007 Integrated Principal Scholarship

First prize scholarship Of New Home

Triple-A pupil model

Excellent student cadre in Communist Youth League

Summer practice of "good social practice report"



2005-2006: Integrated third-class scholarship

Outstanding student leaders

Excellent student cadre in Communist Youth League

Summer practice of "good social practice report"
  

Top answer

Hi, I took a quick look, and here are a few comments. What kind of company do you want to send this to? eg If it's a company that makes cars, you need to say that you are interested in making cars, and focus on any skills that would be useful in a car business.

  • Hi, I took a quick look, and here are a few comments.
  • What kind of company do you want to send this to?
  • eg If it's a company that makes cars, you need to say that you are interested in making cars, and focus on any skills that would be useful in a car business.
  • eg If it's a company that makes shoes, you need to say that you are interested in making shoes, and focus on any skills that would be useful in a shoe business.
  • You also need to say clearly, at the very beginining, what kind of internship you want, eg do you want to do interpretation/translation?
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Hi,
I took a quick look, and here are a few comments.

What kind of company do you want to send this to?
eg If it's a company that makes cars, you need to say that you are interested in making cars, and focus on any skills that would be useful in a car business.
eg If it's a company that makes shoes, you need to say that you are interested in making shoes, and focus on any s

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