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Ex: The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.
The line graph indicates the ratio of garbage recovering in the US during the period between 1960 and 2011
Overall, it is obvious that both percent and tons saw a slight increase during the 1985s and reached a different highs in 2011
The recycling rate were getting 6.4% in 1960. Next, they witnessed a minimal surge to 10.1 % in 1995 and had the tendency to rocket considerately to 25.7% in 1995. There was a slower rate in the next 15 years until it peaked of 32.7% in 2011.
On the other hand, the amount of garbage of being recycled stared with a low of 5.6 tons in 1960. From then on, their total leftover recovery steadily rose and reached over 16.7 tons in 1985 following this they soared dramatically around 55.8 tons in 1995. Finally, they kept rising and peaked a high in 2011 with 86.9 million tons.
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I highlighted in yellow the text that contains errors. I also gave you some in-line comments. 4% in 1960.
- I highlighted in yellow the text that contains errors.
- I also gave you some in-line comments.
- 4% in 1960.
- Next, they (who?
- 7% in 1995.
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I highlighted in yellow the text that contains errors. I also gave you some in-line comments.
The line graph indicates the ratio ("ratio of X to Y" You gave X, but what is Y?) of garbage recovering (improper vocabulary) in the US during the period between 1960 and 2011 (missing punctuation)
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