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Topic:

We can not help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

My essay:

Some people suppose that instead of helping all of the people in other countries, we should only be concerned with our own society. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view because I think that we should try help as many people as possible.

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbors and fellow citizens. There are major people who are impoverished and disadvantage in many ways. For instance, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this issue, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In my country-Vietnam, there are many ways which people can use to help from donating clothes to serving rice. Especially, my government has organized a number of prioritizing local country.

On the other hand, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries, people have faced a lot of serious problems so they extremely need help. For example, the civil war in Syria, a lot of guiltless people had to leave their nation and become war refugees. However, it is awesome that many people can be kept their life as the help from the developed countries. The governments opened their border to allow immigrant to live there with a specified number.

In conclusion, although we can not help every people in the world, I believe that we should help people being in need in other countries if we can.