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The table and pie charts illustrate the total sale and sources of fish imports to the USA in 1988, 1992, and 2000.
Overall, there was an increase in the total sales of imported fish in the USA throughout the period shown. Although Canada accounted initially for the highest proportion of imported fish, other countries took the largest share by 2000. Meanwhile, China's fish export to the USA saw a rising trend, while the opposite was true for Canada.
The total sales of imported fish in the USA in 1998 stood at $6.57 billion, then it rose by almost $2 billion in 1992 and reached its highest at $10.72 billion by the year 2000.
With regard to sources of imported fish, Canada exported 68% in the US in 1988. Other nations followed at 27%, while China trailed at 13%. 4 years later, the figure for Canada plunged by exactly half, whereas both China and other countries climbed to 20% and 46%, respectively. In the final year, 42% of imported fish came from other countries, while both Canada and China had almost the same proportions.

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The table and pie charts illustrate (wrong word) the total sale (?? The data is not sales.) and sources of fish imports to the USA in 1988, 1992, and 2000. (How many sources? What are they?)

Model paragraph.

The table gives the total value of fish imported to the USA for three particular years, 1988, 1992 and 2000 in billions of dollars. The accompanying pie charts break down the total dollars shown in the table by source, giving two main exporting countries, China and Canada, and all others combined.

Overall, there was an increase in the total sales of imported fish in the USA throughout the period shown. Although Canada accounted initially for the highest proportion of imported fish, other countries took the largest share by 2000. Meanwhile, China's fish export to the USA saw (Avoid "see" "witness" and "experience in Task 1. These verbs are not appropriate for a math context.) a rising trend, while the opposite was true for Canada.

Model paragraph

The USA increased its fish imports during this time; the value increasing more than 60% between 1988 and 2000. However, the sources were more diversified and less concentrated in 2000 compared to 1988. Canada's share dropped by more than half, and that from other sources increased by more than half.

The total sales of imported fish in the USA in 1998 stood at $6.57 billion, then it rose by almost $2 billion in 1992 and reached ~~its highest at~~ $10.72 billion in ~~by the year~~ 2000.
With regard to sources of imported fish, Canada exported 68% in the US in 1988. Other nations followed at 27%, while China trailed at 13%. 4 years later, the percentage ~~figure~~ for Canada plunged (This is not a mathematical vocabulary word. Avoid emotive terms in Task 1. Just give facts. ) by exactly half, whereas both China and other countries climbed to 20% and 46%, respectively. In the final year, 42% of imported fish came from other countries, while both Canada and China had almost the same proportions.

Model paragraph

Canada provided nearly $4 billion worth of fish in 1988, and $3 billion in 2000, a drop of 25%. However, its share of the market went down by more than half, from 60% to 28%. China, on the other hand, exported more, its exports being $0.8 billion in 1988 and $3.2 in 2000, a fourfold increase. At the same time its overall market share grew from 13% to 30%. The remaining sources became more important, providing roughly a quarter of the imports in 1988 ($1.8 billion) to approaching half in 2000 ($4.5 billion). The dollar value increased 250%.

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