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劉斐 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me rewrite some sentences appropriately

1.Two settlements were selected as study areas. One is the Amakubo district in the village of Sakura, which was chosen as an example of a settlement in a plain, and the other is the Hojo district in the town of Tsukuba, which was selected as an example of a mountainous settlement.

2. To understand the earth's geophysical phenomena, it is important to obtain muti-component, continuous and real-time marine data in global scale. To carry out observations in the sea, the most reasonable way at present is to use submarine cables for communication and power supply.

3. The monthly mean temperatures observed in 74 sites selected to fulfill specific criteria from 1964 to 2011 and land use data categorized into 11 types, at 100m spatial resolution, including buildings and roads, were used.

  

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Your English is good. Two settlements were selected as study areas: the Amakubo district in the village of Sakura, an example of a settlement on a plain, and the Hojo district in the town of Tsukuba, an example of a mountain settlement. 2.

  • Your English is good.
  • Two settlements were selected as study areas: the Amakubo district in the village of Sakura, an example of a settlement on a plain, and the Hojo district in the town of Tsukuba, an example of a mountain settlement.
  • 2.
  • To understand geophysical phenomena, it is important to obtain multi-component, continuous, real-time marine data on a global scale.
  • The most reasonable method of marine observation at present incorporates submarine cables for power and communication.
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Your English is good. Basically, you need to learn how to eliminate unnecessary verbiage:


1.Two settlements were selected as study areas: the Amakubo district in the village of Sakura, an example of a settlement on a plain, and the Hojo district in the town of Tsukuba, an example of a mountain settlement.

2. To understand geophysical phenomena, it is important to obt

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