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Andyw12345 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Please help me reword the below...

Hi people,

Please can somebody help me reword the below. I am trying to avoid the use of buyers twice:

X1 buyers earn around twice as much as X2 buyers (X is for illustrative purposes only!)



Thanks in advance!
  

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Is it in the context of identifying those who prefer a certain brand? If it's something you can consume, you could use a different verb: Perrier drinkers earn around twice as much as people who choose Pepsi. Or any combination of "choose," "select," "purchase," etc.

— Delmobile

  • Is it in the context of identifying those who prefer a certain brand?
  • If it's something you can consume, you could use a different verb: Perrier drinkers earn around twice as much as people who choose Pepsi.
  • Or any combination of "choose," "select," "purchase," etc.
  • People who buy Sony cameras are likely to earn twice as much as those who go home with an off-brand camera.
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Is it in the context of identifying those who prefer a certain brand? If it's something you can consume, you could use a different verb:
Perrier drinkers earn around twice as much as people who choose Pepsi.

Or any combination of "choose," "select," "purchase," etc.

People who buy Sony cameras are likely to earn twice as much as those who go home with an off-brand camera.
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Thanks Delmobile, that really has helped me :-).
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