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Sonofollow Posted 9 years ago
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Please help me revise this paragraph

"Your smile is my dream.
It's the treasure I want most.
If I have the chance, please let me be the guardian by your side."

I would like it be more poetic or beautiful.

  

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My soul longs for your smile only, A treasure most passionately desired. Allow me to be with you, protect you, embrace you, Basking in the grace of your smile forever.

— AlpheccaStars

  • My soul longs for your smile only, A treasure most passionately desired.
  • Allow me to be with you, protect you, embrace you, Basking in the grace of your smile forever.
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My soul longs for your smile only,
A treasure most passionately desired.
Allow me to be with you, protect you, embrace you,
Basking in the grace of your smile forever.
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