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The figure illustrates the process of producing coffee for consumer usage. Overall, there are eleven distinct stages in the process, from the initial collection of the coffee beans to the eventual stage of packing coffee into jars for selling.

Looking at the first stage in the process, coffee beans are collected. Then, these beans are dried before being roasted at the third stage of the process. After that, the roasted beans are cooled down rapidly and ground in a machine used for grinding coffee. The ground beans are then mixed with hot water at the sixth stage of the process

At the next two stages of the process, the mixture is strained and frozen. Then, the coffee mixture is put in a grinder for a second time. After that, the ground, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, resulting in the final product of the process. Finally, the process is packed into jars for delivery to shops.