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The two maps compare the access to a hospital in a city via roads over a period of three years between 2007 and 2010.

Overall, what stands out from the maps is that there were more ways to access to the hospital. In addition, many new developments were introduced to make the place more accessible and convenient to approach.

Looking at the hospital in 2007, there was a ring road around the city hospital with a road called Hospital Rd branching off to the south and crossing the City Road. Many bus tops lined along the Hospital Rd. To the east of this road was a parking space where both the public and employees of the hospital could park their vehicles.

Focusing on this place in 2010, although the Ring Road and Hospital Road stayed put, a great number of changes had been made by 2010. First, they separated the parking lot into two areas, one for staff members which remained in the initial location, and one for the public which was located to the east of the city hospital, connecting with the Ring Road. Two large roundabouts were also constructed at the two ends of the Hospital Road, linking with a new Bus station built just west of the road.