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The picture illustrates the process of recycling thrown-away glass bottles. Overall, there are 3 major stages, broken down to smaller steps : the acquisition stage, the crushing and formation stage, and then the packaging and delivery stage.
In the first stage, wasted glass bottles will be collected to a collection point and put into transportation. The second stage, high-pressure water removes all of the dirt on the bottles' surface and the bottles are classified into three groups : green, brown and clear glass bottles. Then, the bottles are moved to a glass factory and crushed into glass pieces, then comes the burning step in the furnace, at around 600?C to 800?C. The last step in this stage is forming the bottle shape in glass moulds with recycled liquid glass that has just been made or with new liquid glass. In the last stage of the process, the products with bottle packaging are now perfectly done. They are delivered to the supermarkets and ready to sell.
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"Wasted glass" is not good English. "Discarded bottles" or "used bottles" are much better phrases.
- "Wasted glass" is not good English.
- "Discarded bottles" or "used bottles" are much better phrases.
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"Wasted glass" is not good English. "Discarded bottles" or "used bottles" are much better phrases.
0The picture flow chart / flow diagram illustrates the process of recycling thrown-away glass bottles. (You need to start a new paragraph because you changed the subject from describing the infographic to writing about the main features.
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