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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of citizens in Canada visiting multiple social networks over two years.
Overall, internet users in Canada visiting one site was by far the highest in both years whereas five sites were less common in the rate of Canadian inhabitants using.

Looking at the information in more detail, the percentage of dwellers who did not use any social networking sites in 2014 and 2015 recorded roughly the same at 22% and 21%. Besides, a minimal rise in the rate of people accessing two sites by just only 1% in the given period shown whereas this figure for one site category was highest in both years, hitting the highest point at 36% in 2014 but there was a noticeable decline by 8%.
Additionally, both three fields namely three sites, four sites, and five sites all saw an upward trend but the proportions of internet users visiting three sites and four sites increased marginally by 4% and 3 % correspondingly, meanwhile the figure for five sites comprised of a small fraction, reaching a bottom of just only 2% in 2014.