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Task 1
Your friend is in another country, write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
- why you want to work there
- what skills and work experience you have
- inquire benefits (salary and hours)
Hi Mike
My trip visiting you last month in Australia was a blast. Moreover, thank you for informing me about the high demand for my profession in Melbourne. Australian companies are famous for providing great working environment and plenty of chances for self-improvement, and having a chance to apply for a job in Australia is actually one step closer to my dream job.
As you already know, I have more than five years of experience of being an electrical engineer. My main focus in high rise residential building along with deep technical knowledge and team working skill, I am quite confident to be a good candidate for the Australian consultancy firm.
It would be great if you can advise me more about the average income and working hours per week in Australia? I’d like to include it in my queries for the head hunter firm.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Your friend
Brian
Top answer
Hi Mike My trip V isiting you last month in Australia was a blast. Moreover, thank you for telling informing me about the high demand for my profession in Melbourne. Australian companies are famous for providing a great working environment and plenty of chances for self-improvement , and .
- Hi Mike My trip V isiting you last month in Australia was a blast.
- Moreover, thank you for telling informing me about the high demand for my profession in Melbourne.
- Australian companies are famous for providing a great working environment and plenty of chances for self-improvement , and .
- H aving a chance to apply for a job in Australia is actually one step closer to my dream job.
- As you already know, I have more than five years of experience of working as being an electrical engineer.
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Hi Mike
My trip Visiting you last month in Australia was a blast. Moreover, thank you for telling informing me about the high demand for my profession in Melbourne. Australian companies are famous for providing a great working environment
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