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The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the way chocolate is made on a large scale step by step. Overall, there are 10 stages in total that can be compartmentalized into 2 large stages - before and after being delivered to the factory.
In the first large stage, cacao beans that are planted in 3 regions, namely South America, Africa, Indonesia, are harvested. Before being dried under the sun and put in large sacks afterward, they are fermented thoroughly. The beans then are transferred to the manufactory in which they would go through several more processes.
After being taken to the factory, the beans are first roasted at 350 degrees Celsius. Then, roasted beans are put into a crusher machine before moving on to the next step which is removing the outer shells. Extracting liquid chocolate from the non-shell beans is the final step in which the beans are put into the pressing machine.
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Hà Bùi cacao beans Also known as cocoa in English. Hà Bùi manu factory Should be factory .
- Hà Bùi cacao beans Also known as cocoa in English.
- Hà Bùi manu factory Should be factory .
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Hà Bùicacao beans
Also known as cocoa in English.
Hà Bùimanufactory
Should be factory.
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