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The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
» Write at least 150 words.
The diagrams illustrate the changes that occurred in a town in the United States from 1948 to 2010.
Overall, it is evident that there were significant changes in the Northeast, West and Southwest of the town with the appearance of public facilicites.
To the Northeast of the town, there was a destruction of factories, making way for the appearance of an airport. There was also the construction of a number of commercial buildings and a supermarket near the airport. The local supermarket, which was located in the West corner, was deconstructed, giving way to the birth of several commercial buildings.
The number of houses in the town witnessed a decrease from 17 to 11, and six of these, which was located in the West corner near local supermarket, were knocked down to give way for a variety of commercial buildings. In the Southwest of the town, the sports stadium has been constructed where the church used to be.
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The directions, north, south, east and west are not proper nouns. The diagrams illustrate the changes that occurred in a town in the United States from 1948 to 2010. ) there were significant changes in the N ortheast, W est and So uthwest of the town with the appearance of public facilicites .
- The directions, north, south, east and west are not proper nouns.
- The diagrams illustrate the changes that occurred in a town in the United States from 1948 to 2010.
- ) there were significant changes in the N ortheast, W est and So uthwest of the town with the appearance of public facilicites .
- To the Northeast of the town, there was a destruction of factories, making way for the appearance of an airport.
- There was also the construction of a number of commercial buildings and a supermarket near the airport.
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The directions, north, south, east and west are not proper nouns.
The diagrams illustrate the changes that occurred in a town in the United States from 1948 to 2010.
Overall, it is evident that (This clause does not describe the maps.) there were significant changes in the Northeast,
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