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The maps illustrate the village of Pancha in 2005 and 2015.

Overall, the village evolved into a developed town with better road infrastructure and good communication system.

In 2005, at the center of the village was a dirt road running north-south, with a row of houses and markets on its western side. Furthermore, to the east of this road was a fenced primary school, houses, and an area called Pagoda, which contained two houses and was connected to the road.

By 2015, the dirt road had been transformed into a main road lined with telephone poles and road signs, and satellite dishes were added to some houses. In the west of the village, more markets were built, and a communication tower was erected on the southwestern corner. Regarding the eastern section, after the buildings in the primary school were demolished, a primary and secondary school was built. Also, some houses were destroyed, and although a house in Pragoda was knocked down, two more were constructed there afterwards.