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Goal: Choose three members of my family and write facts and speculations about each one

Is a family, I know a lot about the facts of members in my family, but also have many things I don’t know, it is only speculations

The first person is my mother. In the first fact, my mother was born in 1977 and she is fraternal swins. I think that there are a difficulty to dishtinguish her and my uncle at that time although when they grew up, the similaries between them significantly reduced. And at present, if someone isn’t a member of my family, I certain that they will not believe they are fraternal swins.

The second person is my great grandmother. The age of her is over 90 years old. And certainly, she lived in war time of our country. According to the stories she told me, it’s possible that she bravely fought at that time.

The last person is my father. In my mind, my father is accomplished in many things. He is both a teacher and farmer. And she do those things very well. My father also teach that I have to work digidently and try to do many things I like in the best ways. I think that he faced difficulties and tried worked very hard to become better at present