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Nilabh_s Posted 17 years ago
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Please help me re-phrase this sentencse
Hi,
Please help me re-phrase this sentence. There is lot of repetition of "I was" I want to re-phrase it:-
In school I was into sports I was the volleyball captain of my school I even had creative bend of mind hence I was an active member of debate and dramatics society and I even made contribution to the school and college magazine through my articles.
Please help me re-phrase this sentence. There is lot of repetition of "I was" I want to re-phrase it:-
In school I was into sports I was the volleyball captain of my school I even had creative bend of mind hence I was an active member of debate and dramatics society and I even made contribution to the school and college magazine through my articles.
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"In school I was involved in sports and served as the captain of the volleyball team. I am a creative person so I participated in the debate and drama clubs. "
- "In school I was involved in sports and served as the captain of the volleyball team.
- I am a creative person so I participated in the debate and drama clubs.
- "
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"In school I was involved in sports and served as the captain of the volleyball team. I am a creative person so I participated in the debate and drama clubs. I also contributed articles to the college's magazine."
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does these go with oppurtunity and challenges?
life has always thrown at me challenges and opportunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these.
life has always thrown at me challenges and opportunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these.
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