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0I agree that deaf people are able to feel the emotion of dance but what about blind people? Wouldn't you think music would go before dancing? I think dancing without music is tedious and it wouldn't motivate a person to execute a style comfortably and confidently without music. 02br02br00Anything I could imporove or correct? Thanks 0-

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

0Wouldn't you think music would go before dancing? I don't understand what you mean by 'go before'.02br
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00I think dancing without music is tedious and it wouldn't motivate a person to execute a style comfortably and confidently. 01del~~00without music02del~~00. 02br
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00I'm also a little confused as you seem to want to move on to blind people with your question, but then your following comments seem to relate to deaf people? (Incidentally deaf people dance by feeling the vibrations of the music through the floor etc, it isn't completely without any reference to the music). I don't see how being blind makes any difference to your hearing music and dancing to it?0-

Mountain · Answer

0I appreciate your reply Nona. My assignment was to select a post from our (online class) discussion board and make a direct comparision and defend why I think the art that I chose is better a better teaching tool.02br
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00This is what I have posted on the board 02br
00 I think singing, dancing, and music are all great and effective tools for teaching. But if I had to pick one, I believe music is the most useful and effective in teaching. People can listen to music while driving, eating, watching television, and exercising. Although music is not for everyone but I think the rhythms of music helps us especially the children to remember what they sing and the messages of the words. Listening to music may help students recognize patterns better, a helpful skill specially when learning math and grammar. Many Roman Catholic churches I went to play music, dance, and sing to praise and worship ***. 02br
00This is my classmate's:02br
00I believe that dance is one of the best forms for someome to express them self. Even if a person is deaf they are able to feel the emotion and story that the person dancing is trying to tell with their dancing. Dancing is just a form of stories that people tell from generation to generation. The Indians are a good example of that. Dancing can be any kind of expression or story that the person wants to tell. 02br
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00The above is my response but it seems like I have failed to make a direct comparision. Could you give me an idea as to why "music" may be a better teaching tool than "dancing"? 0-

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