Please Help me Personal Statement for Uk universities

Personal Statement
When I was a kid I was thrilled by “LEGO” and a freedom it gave me to design, practical anything .That hobby improved my creativity. And since when I knew where I wanted to express myself .
I got my first computer when I was 10 year old and Soon I was introduce to the internet . Computer technology has continued to fascinate me ever since. In my spare time I work with computers, design websites and explore the Internet. It was because of this interest that I chose to study Information Technology as one of my A levels. I also attended extra IT courses where I learned the basics of programming.
At first it was just a one web site for me , but this has turned into many different web sites. This developed my skills in using Photoshop, Final Cut, Illustrator, Macromedia Flash & Dream weaver and other web orientated graphics tools.

I have job experience working as a system support engineer, where I was responsible for building machines, installing operating systems, creating user logins , teaching clients’ how to work with different programs. As a result, I have gained invaluable experience working and communicating with clients.

Apart from academic life I also take part in some extracurricular activities, I have attended dancing lessons for ten years and won first places in dancing competition. I have taken part in mathematic competitions and achieved quite good results. Although I and my team have attended commercial competition in Lithuania “MVK 2008” my special knowledge in video editing lead to success and we won 1st place .
Being a student at your University there is no doubt the best choice that I can make for my initial career. Since British Universities has the best reputation for higher education globally although I can study specialty I wont while there are no such specialty to study at my country. Meeting people from different countries and opportunity to study abroad is attractive to me because I can gain more than just an ordinary student’s experience moreover I like challenges.
I feel I can cope with the workload of university, living away from home and being able to discipline myself. I am also prepared for the challenge of a life-changing experience like living in a different country, meeting new people, culture and reaching my aim of a career .

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