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Hendy Gunawan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Please help me out with correcting the grammar

Hi Teachers, I'm writing down the descriptions of an application features. Before submitting it to the store, I need to ensure the correctness of my grammar. Please help me to check it. Here you are :

In order to utilize this feature, there are two ways. Firstly, we are able to access it on main page by inputing any number of a law in text field on top of the screen. Afterward, it will display the number of precedents of the law. We just merely click the icon in which showing the number of precedents, then the list of precedents will be shown up. Secondly, we are able to access it on 'Search Precedent' page by inputting and searching any word related to laws or precedents.

Thanks in advance.
Regards, Gunawan Hendy
  

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There are two ways to use this feature: First, you can access it from the main page by inputting any law number in the text field at the top of the screen. It will then display the number of precedents for that law, and you can simply click the icon and the list of precedents will appear. Second, you can access it from the 'Search Precedent' page by inputting and searching any word related to laws or precedents.

  • There are two ways to use this feature: First, you can access it from the main page by inputting any law number in the text field at the top of the screen.
  • It will then display the number of precedents for that law, and you can simply click the icon and the list of precedents will appear.
  • Second, you can access it from the 'Search Precedent' page by inputting and searching any word related to laws or precedents.
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There are two ways to use this feature:

First, you can access it from the main page by inputting any law number in the text field at the top of the screen. It will then display the number of precedents for that law, and you can simply click the icon and the list of precedents will appear.

Second, you can access it from the 'Search Precedent' page by inputting an
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Hi Mr. Micawber, thanks for your kind reply. There's a question I'd like to ask :

inputting any law number in the text field at the top of the screen. What's the difference between 'at the top of the screen' and 'on top of the screen' ? Could I use 'on top of the screen' at this sentence ?

Thanks again.
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Hendy Gunawan What's the difference between 'at the top of the screen' and 'on top of the screen' ?
'On top of the screen' is the area above your monitor—maybe you have a camera mounted there, or that's where you keep your tea cup.
Hendy GunawanCould I use 'on top of the screen' at this sentence ?
No—that's why I changed it!

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